Death Rhyme

It's a darkness poem but really short<3 hope you like.

Blood and chaos spread in the air,

The smell attraction is taking me to the grave.

I can't wait to meet him,

Babe,

His name is the darkness,

Death,

Who is death?

Rotten chandeliers in the air.

No escaping,

Oh, my dear.

I will consume you,

Oh near.

Day breaks,

Nights shine,

Death is me,

Oh, tonight.

Author's Note

Funny when I get sick I get emotional. So this poem happen I hope you like<3

Reviews

[iamshadowine]

this is so deep and so amazing, especially some of these lines:
"Blood and chaos spread in the air,

The smell attraction is taking me to the grave."
AND
"Day breaks,

Nights shine,

Death is me,

Oh, tonight."

wonderful poem!
keep writing :D

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you I appreciate*-*

[hi]

ok i like it but i found it a little hard to follow,
but i like how you describe darknes

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks, darkness is not meant to be followed but it is.lol

[hi]

i guess you got a point, because of that answer i think the poem makes more sense,lol

[Pink Pastel]

Oh okay then your welcome^-^

[Sapientiam]

Interesting poem! I adore dark poetry because it can convey such clashes of deep emotions. Well done!

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks me too

[Wølfy]

Not bad. Short, sweet and to the point.

[Pink Pastel]

Thanks and hey waz up black wolf

[W&oslash;lfy]

Not much just working on a part four for my light novel.

[Pink Pastel]

Okay cool