Impatient Grace

Patience is a virtue<3

Waiting in line,

1,2,3,4,5

Twice no more I don't want to entwine.

Enlighten me please for now.

Can't wait I am losing hunger and more.

Wanna blow up like a anime in the nightlife.

Funny party,

When angry,

So confused insane,

Impatient takes an impact.

Gracefully murdering illusions,

In impatient.

Patience is torture.

Impatient effects.

Please breathe in and out.

Burned from all.

Sadly tonight.

Author's Note

When I wrote I was waiting for a appointment for like three hours I was so mad that in my head I was like Oh lord give me patience hahahaah!

Reviews

[MAC]

okay, this made me smile. i'm reading a poem about waiting too long...thinking maybe it would be very short but tis written so brilliantly that i want to read more and more. after i read it thought, "wow", she might be teaching me patience with this :)

[Pink Pastel]

Ha ha ha your cute thanks^-^

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

Short but nicely written poem, brought a smile to my face.

[Pink Pastel]

thanks happy halloween!

[Surabhi Kaushik]

Ha ha ha. Good one. Made me laugh too.

[Pink Pastel]

Oh, really?*-* cool

[GalaxyGhost]

"Gracefully murdering grace" is my favorite line in all of this poem! Sometimes when things get too long for me, I really end up daydreaming.

[Pink Pastel]

Yea true you go to another world in the part of your head^-^

[hi]

this is cool, it is like a angry poem but not to anyone or anything

[Pink Pastel]

Yea it's like breaking my pieces, scattered on the ground picking them up only to see them ash lol

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Very good. This poem clearly shows what you were feeling. And I know the excruciating pain of waiting on someone for hours on end. Good job :)

[Pink Pastel]

thanks yea it makes me wanna hate the world lol

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Your welcome and lol yes :)

[iamshadowine]

i really like the flow of the poem! great one!
keep writing :D

[Pink Pastel]

Thank you-------^-^

[Lord of mad men]

This is good. It very hard for me to wait. I have serious add and adhd. I not even joking it so hard waiting i most of the time wait two minutes then start doing somethong else. So yeah this is good and you were tired of waiting when you wrote this like i could not wait that long then right something like this.

[Pink Pastel]

Yea right i was kinda mad i dont like to wait too much.