When you know it

lips pursed in silence

with these three words unuttered

“I love you,” she thought.

Author's Note

One of my first attempts at poetry, written a few weeks ago. It was a part of a collage of things I started (key-word 'started') to write in a flurry of inspiration one night. What do you think?

Reviews

[Stephen]

Yeah ..sounds pretty good. I like your 3 words, I got your point..thanks for loving me, Nichole ..and yeah ..I love you too, Sweety.

Ha! *Kidding*

Anyway, the words are impressive. You mention, it's your first attempt then i'd want to say, it's an extremely appreciable attempt. Just in a first attempt, you shown up how skilled and of course, how talented you are. Yeah, inspirations're hidden behind the words because in love ..there's always a way of being inspire looking over the blues. I admire the piece!

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I see this as maybe more of some kind of saying or something, not poetry.
Although it seems simple but deep and holds a strong meaning behind it.
Well done :)

[Sami Khalil]

I love it...:)......................

[MoriartyMesa]

For one reason or tohter, I find this a nice beautiful cross of Oscar Wilde and Byron.
Good Job

[Costa Siwale]

Well, now that you've started don't stop. Good piece

[parkerjeslick]

Seems like a good start to what can be a series!