You went down for nothing

Oh baby, how naive you're-thinking yourself an acrobat
Jumping around like a big f*****g clown
You thought you could walk the rope
You thought you could play it and play me
But your feet can't steady when
your rope is slacking and your attention is divided as f**k.
So I gave you a long rope and watched you go down and I gave you a long rope and watched you strangle yourself with it.

Reviews

[petec3638]

He sounds to have bitten off more than he could chew

[Neha agrawal]

That rope metaphor lands with serious impact.
Wonderful write.

[Tania Mo]

Thank you for the review

[Chris Shaw]

He ain’t no tightrope walker and you Tania got him sussed and sorted. Sounds like he got his just desserts. Way to go girl. Enjoyed.

Chris

[Tania Mo]

Thank you Chris. Glad you enjoyed. :)

[Pallavi]

Yeah I have felt that way once too, just watch them strangle.

But later realised it wasn't worth it.

[Tania Mo]

Thank you :)

[petec3638]

What a way to say good bye
Give them enough rope to get tangled up

[Tania Mo]

Thank you :)

[DIVYA]

I feel i had written this one. A long rope helps pack up the fools always, doesn't it Tania? This is such a clever write.

[Tania Mo]

Teehee yeah. Thanks Divya.

[Grumpie]

I feel anger, ouch ouch ouch. Success?

[Tania Mo]

Yeah. Success is the right word I guess. Thanks. ;)