Out for blood.

A Story by Courtney

Its an intro to my novel I'm currently writting.

I know what it’s like to live; I know what it’s like to die. But what I don’t know is how it could have ever happened.

Tragedy is her reality. But tragedy is also mystery for 19 year old Scarlett. Tortured by the dark secrets around her, shunned for not being blood, abandoned and traumatized all for her mother did. For her the most deadly thing is to search for answers, demanding to know the truth. And that is exactly what she does. Little does she know she is piece by piece digging her own grave.

Writing everything in blood someone in the shadows is hell-bent on destroying everything she loves. It will take power, hope, defiance and determination to find the peace she so desperately craves.

© 2013 Courtney

Author's Note

This is a book intro for a book I'm writing. I just want to see what people think. If you have any editing tips. ( Which I'm sure you will.) Leave a review if you want me to post the first chapter. Hope you like.

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CreativeStroke

This is a great intriguing start to a novel. It has some mystery behind it and you really did a good job with drawing your reader into the story.
There are some areas where you need to add some commas, such as... "For her the most deadly thing is to search for answers, demanding to know the truth. And that is exactly what she does." Instead of starting off the second sentence with 'and' I would put a comma after truth and combine everything together. The sentence starting with 'and' isn't a complete sentence so it works better if you combine it with the sentence prior to it.
Easy fix :)
Good luck with the rest of your story. Let me know when post more.