Kill yourself

Kill yourself

Do it

You won't

We all know that you are far too selfish to actually do it.

You aren't a thinker, writer, artist

You're nothing special

You love yourself too much

That's why the only thing you talk about it yourself

And her

You talk about her a lot

Can't you see it's killing me? 

But I'm always there for you

Always

And you just treat me like s**t

You cut for attention

You're a social smoker

You're a poser

You're annoying

You're an a*****e

I love you so much

Its killing me.

Reviews

[Sirius King]

very nice!

[Isobella Rose]

I really like this poem. I can relate to this and I'm sure others can too. We all have those people that we think of this way.

[miguelbovine]

very clever

[Cosmic kid]

Thank you

[Annabelle Lee]

Perfect, just the way it is. Bravo

A.L.

[R J Askew]

Great write. The mixed up feelings are just how it is. We hate those we love because they either don't love us back. We see exactly how things are and shoudl be, but they have nooooooo idea, just get it all so wrong. And so it goes. Eventually we move on though. But at the time... You nailed it.

[Autumn]

Very well constructed, the mix between love and hate is lovely combined. Even if you poem doesn't rhyme, there is a smooth flow. The last 2 lines are very powerful, the perfect ending for your poem.

[Cosmic kid]

Thank you :)

[Admiral Kirk]

Very interesting... :) Conflicting emotions... something going on in your life? If that's the case, poetry IS the best escape. Great read, thank you for writing it. :D

[Cosmic kid]

Haha yeah we're all a bit crazy sometimes

[The Watcher]

Really interesting poem. I can sense mixed emotions here as well

[Cosmic kid]

Thank you :)

[The Watcher]

You're welcome =)