Continental

Author's Note

Five minute play around. x

Reviews

[Nyu]

Simple, beautiful work of feeling and imagery.

[Melliflower]

Thank you for your lovely comment xx

[Sam]

Remarkably similar to another poem you wrote called Fairytale. A contest winner if I'm not mistaken.

While good, I feel that I must say, the version you submitted to me was vastly superior.

[Melliflower]

I changed it due to comments that it lacked fluidity and appeal. I wish i hadn't! I think i have a copy of the old version lying around somewhere... i hope. I'm glad somebody appreciates its adolescent stage. Thank you for reviewing. x

[Jeff Miller]

This is short, but I like it!

[Melliflower]

Thank you! And thanks for stopping by! x

[Arsh]

Whenever it comes to "fairy-tales"... the word "love" always seems belonging to such pieces, no matter what. Very nice & deep poetry! ;)

[Melliflower]

I couldn't agree more! And thank you x

[Arsh]

Sounds good by me.
Ps. Even the love belongs to you. xoxo