Kiss

hahah i got bored

A peach is a peach

A plum is a plum

BUT

A kiss is not a kiss until

You use your tongue

Reviews

[Forgotten]

I find this poem funny, it seems comical. Yet I somehow don't agree with it, a kiss can hold emotion no matter how it's preformed.

[Diwakar - "The Warrior ..]

True :-).....kiss....is an act of love.........equally acted by both side........an act which touch the souls rather than body.......:-)

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. Different kind of kisses. Some sweet kisses leave a permanent sweet memory we won't forget. Emotion and desire make the kiss come alive. Nice flow of words and a very good ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote