Cleaver

I dunno what this is about... or maybe i do!

Simple antagonists depend on simple anatomy

But our anatomy is far too complex

I can make things more simple and cut off my hands

But now all the ideas i tried to simplify, I cannot grasp

Simple minded person I am.  Looked too far into simplicity; ended up mangled

Reviews

[Robyn]

Very cunning poem. Truth lies in the fact that simplicity is not always the best thing, though it's often what we want. Is that what the poem means?

[Puja]

this is an amazing poem.
its very clever and hides great meaning behind simple words.
it was a fabulous read. :D

[*Kantola*]

Beautiful poem :)
Made plenty sense. "IF I CUT OFF MY HANDS, I CANT GRASP" Made sense, but was also fairly sarcastic at teh same time. I sense a hidden writer in you, somewhere... fantastic writing :)