Hypothermia

Instead of taking a nap in religion class today, I wrote this lil doozy!

Sitting out in the snows

I'm Freezing

My face is burning cold

I'm Sneezing

Jack's biting off my nose

I'm so Numb

"Smoke outside" myself told

I'm so Dumb

Reviews

[Cortney Lynn]

moral of the story- dont smoke outside if its freezing out!

i like this one a lot! but i like it better in your handwriting.

[*Kantola*]

Yeah, hypothermia is a retarded thing... Learned all the facts about it this week, actually... Such weird conditions... BUT NOT REALLY! Good job with this. Its amazing how just a few lines/words of poetry can explain something so deadly :) Beautiful poem! BRAVO!