Lustfully Singing

had this idea! and here it is! fish!

The...

I love spending the night with you

to wake up to your beatiful face

years...

I like spending the night with you

to think about how sore my lips are

go...

I'm spending the night with you

to only alleviate my lonliness

on...

I hate spending the night with you

to sin with you; to show my impurity

Reviews

[Chad Halle]

wonderful! don't think i've ever read anything written similar to this- tis a great, imaginative style

[Ben Walton]

ben, this is brilliant.

[she makes me weird]

Good write. I really enjoy how you go from "love spending" to "like spending" to "spending" to "hate spending". This is creatively written. Great use of words.

[*Kantola*]

That was an interesting poem! I like how you wrote "The...Years...Go...On". I havent seen that in a poem, yet. Beautiful way of describing this. I enjoyed it :)