Awkward looking words

im not me not im

Sometimes... things just sorta fall apart

outta place

Sometimes... we fix these things

outta tape

Sometimes... we just need to cope

outta space

Sometimes... nothing works at all

outta shape

Just another fish without water...

Can't you just deal with the nice, dry oxygen?

Guess not... guess you'll shrivel...

and stop all that obnoxious jumping...

as if it even helped...

I Guess you were outta place

You Didnt need the tape...

The Space didn't seem to help...

You must be outta shape...

since you obviously didnt make it home...

Author's Note

I dont like this poem... i was just sorta writing... too much thought involved... way too jumbled...

Reviews

[Robyn]

It may be a little jumbled but I do like the rhythm and structure of it.

[darkgurl]

Well you can say you are at words, Jumbled thoughts, but as well it is well put together.