Where I'm From

Where I'm From

A Poem by Eliza Pleasant
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It's something I wrote in my class. Enjoy!

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I am from harsh winds and quick freezes, from brutal heat and random weather.

I am from the backside of a shopping empire, where there are more cats than people.

I am from a grand oak tree, where children use its roots for kingdoms.

I am from long trips and strawberries, from Aunt Trisha and Heather and Uncle Milo.

I am from a population of sarcastic, big-dreaming people and big feasts.

I am from a world where the only Santa lives on TV, and "they're only talking loudly."

I am from people who love me and my family and God, where I long to be now.

I am from North Carolina and weird relatives, surrounded by Slushess and barbeque.

From the surprising event of life, the acceptance letters, and the unending love and guidance of Elizabeth.

© 2009 Eliza Pleasant


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This was great! I loved all the little descriptions of where you're from, and I thought that they were like little snippets, giving great insight into who you are.
I'm so sure that I wrote a poem in this structure when I was younger at school, and I can understand how much sentimental value a write like this can have, and how difficult it can be to summarise all you know into however many lines. This piece had a nice balance between giving enough information and yet leaving enough room for mystery and intrigue. I really enjoyed reading this! :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice introduction of yourself..? Well, this is wonderful, and I love the 'weird relatives' part. lol, I have them too! lol

Posted 15 Years Ago


This was great! I loved all the little descriptions of where you're from, and I thought that they were like little snippets, giving great insight into who you are.
I'm so sure that I wrote a poem in this structure when I was younger at school, and I can understand how much sentimental value a write like this can have, and how difficult it can be to summarise all you know into however many lines. This piece had a nice balance between giving enough information and yet leaving enough room for mystery and intrigue. I really enjoyed reading this! :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Eliza Pleasant
Eliza Pleasant

Lubbock, TX



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My dreams have taken a complete U-Turn. I still have a slight glimmer, a little bit showing that I want to write for a living. So, here's that glimmer. I have lived a number of years that has offer.. more..