The push I need

Going for it all

Putting everything I need into it

But one vacant spot in my heart is empty

No one there to cheer me on

No one I know to watch me become all I can be

Pushing it hard with a vacant spot in my heart

Feeling the pain having no one to believe in me

Not having the push inside of me

Hard to tell far from what I can see

To overcome all odds

Tears like sweat from my eyes

No its not from the pain

But the thing not able to believe in myself

Reviews

[Bailey C. Writing]

Great deal of emotion in such a short poem, and it's relatable, always a good aspect in a great poem. Good job

[Dupree]

I love how you pour your emotions out for all to see. It is a very brave thing. One that not many do. The emotion in your pieces is amazing.

[Yina]

This has a lot of emotions in it. I've been there to, not believing in myself. It is hard. Great write, Crazo14:)

[Sethnicity]

Real, Strong, Well tempered... I respect this piece because it is blunt, Very masculine and request no apologies from the reader. It's rare to find an Actual poem that has intrigue and mystery but comes of so... Matter of fact!

[Brianna]

this is a great write to explain the feelings of someone who is missing motivation. I completely understand where you went with this, and it flowed very nicely. Great job :)
~Chey

This saddened me, which is hard to do. Pain can be the best inspiration for our poetry and writing, and this is a true example. Well done.

[deeps]

This is sad but well expressed.

[Desmund Tiny]

waaaaah, it is so sad...... but amazing.....
"But one vacant spot in my heart is empty
No one there to cheer me on" I love this lines....... ^^,

[Thea]

Aw, so sad...But well written...

[Megan Step]

I feel ya. im the same way. No matter how much support you may have and good you may be, if you don't believe in yourself than nothing matters. You have believe that you can do it in order to keep your dream alive and to fight and possibly achieve it. But it all starts with you, and it always will.

This poem seriously made me cry. It hit a part of my heart because I have been struggling with the same problem. And it's has taken a very long time for me to actually give myself a chance to go for my dreams.

I hope you go and achieve your dreams and I hope that you give yourself a chance to believe in yourself.
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