I imagine this would piss off a few people who don't share the same view, but I think it's great. There are few people out there who are so free thinking and so up front with their views. This piece has the potential to spark great debate. Yet there is a sense that you are critical of those who don't share your view. You are almost harsh in calling them tools to a foolish beliefe in a higher being. Still I think its a good piece simply because it inspires introspection and can lead to lengthy phillisophical discussions, always an interesting thing in my book.
I disagree, but that is neither here nor there.
I believe that you're a very brave person ta put this up for the world ta see. It takes a lot ta put yourself on a martyrs cross. I too am very big on standing up for my beliefs, and, though they are extremely different from other peoples, they are still a spirituality ta me. I believe simply because I see in the world around me, the air I breath, and the beautiful things that very easily distract me... like butterflies lol.
Again, very brave of you.
I give ya serious props.
Dude...
That is one sick rhyme...
Now...don't too much crime...
cause that way...you're the one who would be in prime...
That would make soak in a lime...
LOL!!
I like the fact that you have posted this, I am sure that many people will be offended but it's only your opinion and you have a right to voice it, whether I agree with you is irrelevant. People with faith shouldn't be bothered by your poem..they'll just believe your going to hell!!! LOL
I see this is getting a lot of attention.. haha
I see your point here, but it doesn't convince me that God is false and such things
Yes science has proven many things, like say the big bang theory. big bang THEORY.. i don't know, really no one knows why we are here and what will happen to us when we die.. thats the whole mystery of life. It seems as if everyone wants an answer to everything... but whats the fun in that?
Picture its all figured out.. what is everyone going to do then? I think its good to have different faiths and beliefs.. it gives the person a backbone, not in a way that its what they depend on to not go insane, some people do depend on their beliefs too much i think for my liking, but hey.. is what lifes all about, trying to figure things out.. giving your own ideas to what will happen to you, or your traditional ideas.. and everyone will find out eventually but people believe things because yes they don't want to just think you die and nothing happens.. i don't think anyone truely wants to believe that so thats why they guess and assume things, it gives some people a reason. But some people like yourself don't need a reason to be here. Your poem can really open up eyes, but really what has science proven? Not our existence really.. they only have theories on that.
Dang, it makes you wish someone was alive right now who was around during the making of the universe.. but then again people weren't alive then. So who the hell was?
God i'm getting myself going. must stop.
DONE.
I imagine this would piss off a few people who don't share the same view, but I think it's great. There are few people out there who are so free thinking and so up front with their views. This piece has the potential to spark great debate. Yet there is a sense that you are critical of those who don't share your view. You are almost harsh in calling them tools to a foolish beliefe in a higher being. Still I think its a good piece simply because it inspires introspection and can lead to lengthy phillisophical discussions, always an interesting thing in my book.
i really like all your writings,they make me think all the time..
but i wish you were right..but come to think with me..
about two thirds of people on this planet they believe in God,are they all fools..
you think none of them just once thought to himself and thought like you do,
and asked himself ,but where is God,you cant say they are all fools,
or they have never thought about it..
and whats wrong in believing in God,only those who use it and interpret the meaning in their own ways to
their own benefit,then it very wrong,it like changing it into politics and here
where all really goes wrong..
lovely write..
these are my favorite poems that I have done
Letter To Keira KnightleyA Poem by The Reviewer
Everybody's CrazyA Poem by The Reviewer
Cradle Of Filth - Lilith Immaculate
Dimmu Borgir - Ga.. more..