Don't Think Of Me

A poem on lost love and betrayal. Forget the past. It doesn't exist anymore.

Don't think of me
Even though you are married
What's the point
Delete me from your cellphone
I don't need to know
what you're doing anymore
You don't need to know
What I'm doing now
I hope you are happy
But I think you are lonely
Isn't he satisfying
All your needs?
If not then I'm sorry
I cannot be
The one who will set you free
That time has passed
You're living in the past
And you can kiss my a*s
I have the last laugh
So I'm asking kindly
Please don't think of me

Reviews

[Natalie C]

At first I thought, oh wow, a serious piece but then true to "the reviewer" style. The fine humor came seeping through. Loved it my friend, specially the last couple of lines.

[K-mo]

this is good, your emotions are clearly shown

[Cathy Wattam]

I like this. I can feel the bitterness seeping through, provoking emotion. Short and succinct. Nice write.

[Ama May Cooper]

A very powerful piece, the almost bitter resentment of a broken heart fuled and burning with a strength unmeasurable, laced with further thinking and freedom. A heart wrenching piece on teh struggle of moving on displaying the pure strength required to pass the heartbreak. Wonderful work

[An owl on the moon]

There is that emotional rift when worlds fall apart... and you've filled this with that sadness... remorse of loss, yet a courage to move on... Powerful write.

[☢ZoMbIeS sLaYeR&#..]

nicely written! says alote

[Alicia Schroeder]

well said.. to many ppl live in the past.. move on.. great write :D

[Octob3r Star]

I think its important to maintain a relationship with partners that folks have been with. In my head, if you can't- either you're in complete pain or one never loved the other in the first place.