Rain

This is a short poem about rain!

Rain rain dripping down,
Never seems to touch the ground.
Drip drop it would say,
Come again another day.
Rain rain please don't go,
I love to see you drop and flow.

Reviews

[papaed]

100% humidity. 100% creative talent. Made me smile and try to sing it.
A cool poem by a cool girl. 8-)

[Cool Girl]

Haha
Thank you :)

[Not here]

Lol this is a really good poem. great job cool girl

[Cool Girl]

Thank you:).

[E.K.Donaldson]

The way you wrote it makes it sound like the words are rain drops. I love that. Great job. Beautiful poetry. Thanks for sharing.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much!! I love the rain :)

[closed]

Congratulations on winning the ''Paired Up Poetry'' contest Aless
seems this is a very popular poem

Another success for my starlet^

and I know there will be others to come

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much for congratulating me, and thanks for reading the poem :)

[closed]

you're welcome
wouldn't have missed it

[Confuser]

Sweet Cool Girl; I really enjoyed it. Thank you so much.

[Cool Girl]

Thank you, Dale!!

[Confuser]

You're welcome; liked even more the second time around!:D

[Cindy Marietta]

Short sweet and simple, I loved it!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks!!! :)

[DoormanDan]

This poem is easily one of your best. It flows like rain water(pun intended because I AM THAT ONE GUY). This is explicit proof that poems don't have to be long to be good. Great job, here's five imaginary doughnuts :)

[Cool Girl]

Haha, Dan. It's nice to see you stopping by! I've missed you lately..
Thank you so much for the wonderful review! I like your corny jokes xD
Thanks for the doughnuts too! Gotta love doughnuts :)

[closed]

graceful words
poised form

another great piece my star

-your dream guardian

[Cool Girl]

thank you my dear :)

[....................]

I use to play in the rain when I was a kid and I still enjoy being caught in a shower. Short and sweet.

[Cool Girl]

Haha really?!? Me too!! Thanks so much :)

[....................]

Oh yeah, I love the rain, especially a warm rain. You are welcome!

[(JR) Joshua Hernandez]

This piece. This is awesome. Simple short and sweet, I almost read it as a song. Catchy and sweet. Awesome job!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you, JR!! I do love rain :)