Flying

Again it is sad.

Looking up into the sky,
Makes me have the urge to fly.
Up up up, we'd float together,
Seeming like we'd float forever.
So when I look up at the sky,
It also makes me want to cry.
For those who have flown before,
They are long gone now,
More gone then before.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ryan Henderson]

I like this poem, at first it seems like it is about love, but at the end it suggests that it is about Heaven (If you believe in Heaven, anyway) I like this poem because the flow was good, it was short (Which is not a bad thing) and it was emotional, just enough so that it seemed deep, but not too emotion filled to make it seem like you are spewing out your feelings. Great work!

[Cool Girl]

Thanks s much!

[Cool Girl]

haha, I can't spell:) I meant so, not s