I Don't Know

I have no idea what the heck this is...

There's a fire in your heart
There's a fire in your soul
There's a fire in your eyes
And a story left untold
If you want to hear the story
Then you better listen up
And you better hold on
Because it's going to get rough.

Author's Note

I have no idea....

Reviews

[success]

nice short poem carrying great message...well penned

[Cool Girl]

Thank you! )

[Moonlight]

A message so important,
delivered in just a few lines...

That's how i felt about the piece. Great work! :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much, you are very kind!

[Moonlight]

your welcome. :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well though i can't tell you whay it is.......but believe me it is so beautiful!!!!
loved it!!!
:)

[Cool Girl]

Haha, thanks so much!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome!! :) :)

[Clockwork]

I'd say this would be a good mantra to repeat to yourself every morning. You know, one of those things you repeat to yourself in the mirror before you leave to go to work or school. A message that reminds you of the best qualities in yourself so you can master the day. Maybe I'm just reading a little it far into the motivating core of this poem.

[Cool Girl]

Haha, I do like your opinion! Thanks for reviewing!

[Elie Marie]

I absolutely adore this. This is how I feel about the last few years of my life. So rough, so worth it. Great poem.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much!

[Poet]

I'm not quite sure what it is either but it sounds awful good. :)

[Cool Girl]

Thanks! :)

[Confuser]

....so you gotta stay strong. I'm adding more on your small but lovely masterpiece. Quite nice. Thank you.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks so much! :)

[Confuser]

Y/W........................great writing.

[Gee]

sweet,like other reviewer said could be the start of a longer piece.

[Cool Girl]

Thanks! :)

[Lizardo]

I would think that this is the beginning of a story
Other than that it is pretty good, I like the opening lines

[Cool Girl]

Thanks, I wrote it at like 3:00 in the morning xD

[Lizardo]

hahaha you are welcome