My Canadian Flag

Back to my old love poems..

Sweet like the sap of a maple tree,
Strong like a true patriot,
Pure as the color white,
Heart pumping with the color red,
Wave high, my Canadian flag.

Author's Note

Trying to get back into my swing! :)

Reviews

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Looks like you have found your swing, CG. As a Canadian, this makes me proud to fly my flag! Well-done!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you ;) lol *wink*

[closed]

kool metaphor use

the flag seems to symbolize identity
and leads the poem pretty well

nice way to return to your form


-Dream

[Cool Girl]

Yes.. I'm glad you like my metaphor! It's about one of my Canadian friends :)

[Tom McRoberts]

I'm sure a tear would be coming to my eye were I a Canadian. Great, impassioned write, Cool girl.

[Cool Girl]

Lol I'm not even Canadian, I just have so many Canadian friends! I'm American ;) but I decided to write about the Canadian flag! Thanks though :)

[Costa Siwale]

Short and sweet. Good work Cool

[Cool Girl]

Thank you, costa siwale

[Shawna]

Very nice :) It shows a pride in your people and homeland. Back in the day I wrote a poem for my flag too. Why not? We write poems about love all the time... Why not love of country as well? :)

[Cool Girl]

Thank you so much :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well sis:) i love this one.

[Cool Girl]

I'm glad! ;)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are back in your swing:)

[Cool Girl]

Yep! I'm very happy :)

[Saddam]

Great coloring dear. Love this.

[wordman]

and it is a colorful flag,red and white,bold

[Cool Girl]

Yes indeed :)