Heart's Desire

Heart's desire

He is out there
Searching for his true love
Time has passed but he hasn't lost hope
He carries on
He knows that one day he will find her
Only then he will be complete

Reviews

[prodicallife]

Dear Praveeta,

This is so hard, a heart crying, running aimlessly just with a hope that, the direction it is invading this time is the one that would lead him to the one he always cared for.

Million blisters born, million are dead but, still it doesn't care and just keeps running to get that one person.

Thanks for sharing such beautiful piece.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Vandana Sharma]

Such a yearning for true love.........

[ZeniaK]

This is such a heartfelt poem. I like that you described it kind of from a guy's point of view, I really liked that.

[Coyote Poetry]

A good description for the search for love. I believe true love will find us if we have patience. Don't rush something that should come with ease and pleasure. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[PoetryPenPal]

I loved this beautiful display of words. I enjoyed this poem alot!

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:).................

[Vidya Bacchus]

I understand the need to find that person that makes you feel complete.It is most lovely when you do .Nice poetry my friend:)