Cloak

Cloak

She smiles
She giggles
She covers it all
No one notices her misery at all

Deep within she is hurt
But does not regret
One day her pain will be gone
That day she will be reborn

Author's Note

Just crafted this now. Please feel free to comment.

Reviews

[Kami Grace]

The title matches perfectly with the poem. By acting, she cloaks her pain with false smiles... Very sad and beautiful.
In the first stanza, the words are so simple, yet that is all we do to deceive other people that we are okay. "Smiles", "giggles", these reflect reality so much that I really feel the pity and sadness behind the poem.
What makes the poem really stand out is that the hope in the future. She will recover from her pain, and get a new life. I felt that strong message to every part of my body.
Very well-written, thank you for posting it! :)

Kami

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your insightful review. Highly appreciate it.

[zainul]

Both the poem and the picture are quite meaningful.
I love the tune of optimism that is expressed in the last two lines.
"One day her pain will be gone
That day she will be reborn"
Thank you Praveeta for crafting the little piece with strong hope.

[Praveeta]

Thank you Zainul for positive feedback. I appreciate your comments.

[zainul]

You are most welcome,creative poet.:)

[prodicallife]

Dear Praveeta,

This is something that I have been reading on writerscafe for a very long time now.

However, what I feel is, nobody has been so creative to name the poetry with such a beautiful name and adding to it, I have never read anybody who was able to show the entire scenario with such limited words.

Beautiful effort

Keep up the great writing.

Stay blessed
Prodical

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for the lovely feedback. I appreciate your wonderful comments.

[prodicallife]

You are always welcome with such beautiful work.

Thanks for sharing once again
read moreYou are always welcome with such beautiful work.

Thanks for sharing once again

Regards
Prodical

[Vidya Bacchus]

A most uplifting poem .I really like it:)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your remarkable comment.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome:)