Contagious

Contagious

A pleasant sight it is
Eyes set on each other
Arms around each other
They twirl from one end to the other

Onlookers join in
Swaying with the rhythm
Mimicking the pioneers
In the quest for excellence

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Anand Sehgal]

Onlookers join in
Swaying with the rhythm
Mimicking the pioneers
In the quest for excellence

you revealed an eternal truth :)
very good write :)
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[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and wonderful review. I appreciate it.

[Anand Sehgal]

my pleasure dear :)

[Anita Singh]

It is true that the audiences cant help and are drawn into such a pleasant visual. Nice work!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and comment.

[Brittany Zedalis]

A simple and beautiful poem. I could really visualize what was going on. :]

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the read and review. I am glad you liked it.

[Shaquana Adams]

I love the visual here. It would make a very good movie scene! Good work! :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the lovely review.

[SUGATA M]

Looks like you just breathed the poem out being struck by a sudden emotional twitch. You can't say in a better way than this 'how contagious love is'.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and review.

[Sue Hart]

It was very visual. You could hear the music and watch the dancing. You are very good at this.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely review.

[paras]

short and sweet i must say much explained in few words :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your feedback,Paras.

[imagwriteine]

Nice echo with the title contagious, but I think the rhythm is a bit queer at times.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your review.

[imagwriteine]

You're welcome

[Arialti]

awww….okay, I'm not much with words, but I like this too. :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your lovely comment.

[Ahena MK]

Delicious reading ... Short and sweet ...
Ahena

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your time and review. I appreciate it.

[Ahena MK]

Welcome :)