Time - A Priceless Commodity

Time - A Priceless Commodity

Time is ticking
So much to learn
So much to share
So much to achieve

Reviews

[Catherine Frain]

This poem is a good one, and it so very true. In the small limit of time, we as a human being, are allotted- we have so many things to do. We must learn from the things we do and see, share the lessons that we have learned. We have to achieve so many things- whether major or minor. This poem is an excellent view point on this.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your insightful review. I highly appreciate it.

[Avinash]

A good reminder to value it . Thanks for sharing this simple but precious piece.

[Praveeta]

Thank you Avinash for your lovely feedback. I appreciate it.

[Khushi]

time indeed is priceless and never waits or returns. The poem is worth a read for time wasters like me. Maybe the first line could be the last one, this way.
So much to learn
So much to share
So much to achieve
Time is ticking.
Just a suggestion. Final decision yours. What say??

[Praveeta]

I agree that time and tide wait for no man. Thanks for your feedback.