Fiery ball

Soaring summer heat

Sweat dribbling down forehead

Blood hits boiling point

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I would be glad to see the sun. Here in Michigan maybe 11 inches of snow. I prefer cold over heat. Can't escape the heat. Warm clothing keep you safe from the cold. Very good use of words. Create a good vision with the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely feedback.

[Shaquana Adams]

Nice imagery. The summers here seem exactly like this poem!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the read and comment.

[Brittany Zedalis]

Exactly how it felt last summer around here. ^-^

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading my piece.

[Brittany Zedalis]

You are welcome

[one sky]

Nice in its conciseness. I enjoyed the read.
That's what many of us is waiting...it's a chilling month now.

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your invaluable time and review. I appreciate it. Sun has been smiling quite generously this side.

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

Nice haiku it makes you warm and cozy and the steams you to the core.

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for your invaluable feedback.

[POETIC SOUL 2013]

No problem.

[Raymond Federle]

Very truly a wonderful poem! I've most of your pieces and I sense a deep current of hidden undertones and emotional innuendo. There is much more going on here than meets the eye and readers would do well to read your work more than once. :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you so much for your insightful review. I highly appreciate it.

[Frieda P]

This warmed me up...send some of that heat this way will ya Praveeta...well done, no pun intended! ;-)

[Praveeta]

Certainly, we have more than enough. Thank you for your lovely words.

[Frieda P]

Brrr, it's cold here, thanks! And my pleasure.

[Arialti]

This is a superb description of a heat wave. Well done!

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your lovely review, dear friend.

[Arialti]

You're very welcome! :)

[Sue Hart]

By what I've heard, this pretty much describes Australia in huge sections of the country.

[Praveeta]

Yes, you are right. :)

[Khushi]

the fiery ball is the sun, right? I agree with the poem, heat is sometimes uncomfortable. I like ur work in genealogy. Short simple stuff that conveys a lot.

[Khushi]

I mean general

[Praveeta]

Yes, sun is the fiery ball. Thanks for your lovely feedback.

[Mashairi]

Excellent use of sensory. Reminds me of the heat of Fresno XD. Well done :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you for the lovely comment.

[Mashairi]

Absolutely welcome :D