Surreal

Surreal

Sculptured by my thoughts
Enlivened by my feelings
The person of my dreams
You are standing

Reviews

[Arialti]

It's beautifully written as all your poems are. :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your lovely review.

[Sami Khalil]

You have captured it powerfully...Bravo..........

[Praveeta]

Thank you Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome happily...:).............

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well Praeeta this is sweet and short,The person we love shaped by our feelings for them .They are our heart's desire:)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your lovely comment. I appreciate your input.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :P

[Saddam]

The person of my dreams
You are standing
truely the ocean poem, I can say? very thoughtful poetry. loveya.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your positive review.

[Saddam]

you are welcome.

[SAYED THANGAL]

the depth and intimacy to the beloved is well established through the poem.

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your insightful review.

[Ahena MK]

really good.... loved the light rhyme in it.. excellent
ahena :)

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your comment. I am glad you liked it.