I do

I do

Dressed in white gown
Embellished with sequins
She walks down the aisle

Bouquet in her hand
She reaches the groom
Her appearance like a goddess

Union of two souls
Is witnessed at the altar
In cosmic presence

Author's Note

A poem for my best friend. Looking forward to your wedding.

Reviews

[F.Gentil]

I once had a vision, not seeing in a dream, but basically an hallucination in which I married myself. Quite strange I must say, but unearthly beautiful. This poem reminds me of that. It takes me to the spiritual realm where what I perceived as reality was magnificent and divine. I could feel the cosmos auras around my body, for in it I was an embodiment of God. I was a part of that cosmos. It makes me wonder if when two souls get married in our world, if this embodiment is the true emotional state felt.

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and insightful review. I highly appreciate it.

[Kami Grace]

The poem is very beautiful. Perfectly described the sweet scene of the bride going to her wedding. Your friend must feel so blessed to read the lovely words and I like this very much! :)

Kami

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your lovely feedback. She is a special friend and I told her today that I will be writing a poem about her wedding.

[Frieda P]

Your friend must be thrilled, very sweet indeed Praveeta!

[Praveeta]

Thank you for your kind words. I appreciate it.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, thank you for sharing your soulful sentiments here.

[Talesha]

Aww,I want my friend to write me one when I'm getting married lol. This is so eloquent and sweet.The words flow perfectly and create a vivid picture.I love this poem! Thank you for sharing.

Best wishes,
TM

[Praveeta]

Thanks so much for your kind review. I highly appreciate it.

[Talesha]

no problem at all :)

[Arialti]

It's beautiful, elegant and I just love the last three sentences "union of two souls, is witnessed at the altar, in the cosmic presence". Great job Praveeta! I love it a lot! :)

[Praveeta]

I am glad you loved it. Thanks for the lovely review.

[My Favorite Writer !]

its beautiful ! :) short yet fascinating..

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the lovely review.