Fighting Temptations

Decadent desserts on display
Creamy Chocolate Mousse
Classic Creme Brulee
Sumptuous Strawberry Trifle
Tempting Tiramisu
The presentation so inviting
Almost giving in I walk away

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Good food is my weakness. A delicious treat like in the artwork would steal my hunger and I would be done. Somethings we need to keep a distance from. Hard to fight the desire of sweet and tasty foods. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading my piece and for sharing your thoughts.

[Luke L]

ha great stuff, very relatable

[Praveeta]

Thanks for your time and review :)

[Arialti]

The way you describe those temptations makes my mouth water….feel like something sweet now. Good for you…able to walk away like that. One of my favorite poems! :) :) :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading my piece and for the sweet comment :)

[Latifa]

oh man I'm a desert freak and I fail to fight temptation

[Praveeta]

I can imagine. Thanks for reading my piece.

[Robert Strzalko]

Why fight it? Why not enjoy yourself?

[Praveeta]

Leads to addiction :)

[Robert Strzalko]

What is the point in being alive if you can't enjoy life? You're a beautiful woman. Surely it wouldn't hurt you to have a few sweets.

[charlie]

If only it were true what they say; how we eat first with our eyes... One look alone would satisfy. But then two or three more wouldn't hurt either :)

[Praveeta]

:) thanks for the read and comment.

[Kotryna]

So tempting indeed! Great work :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks a lot for the read and review.

[LadyAnn68]

Good for you! these are the worst and it is all about presentation an advertizing!

[Praveeta]

Thanks for reading and commenting.

[Cerise]

GUDLORD!!!!1...Am a completeeee foodieee..and those words are soo tempting..how can anyone possibly walk away it would be a crimee....:)

[Praveeta]

All yours :) thanks for reading and commenting.

[A. Amos]

God all those names sound so inviting.....how can you walkaway without giving love to even one........ :)

[Praveeta]

I know and so are the flavours. Looks like you have surrendered to these tempting desserts just by reading about them :) It is an ongoing issue of fighting these temptations.

[A. Amos]

Why are all the good things bad for health?????????

[Praveeta]

I agree dear friend.

[Raymond Federle]

ok...now I'm hungry...Excellent poem...but it still make me hungry. :)

[Praveeta]

Thanks for the read and feedback.
Creamy Chocolate Mousse and Classic Creme Brulee are the only ones left.
Sumptuous Strawberry Trifle and Tempting Tiramisu have been taken :)