Undecided

This is a poem for the person I loved more then anything else and then just left.

I love you,

But I don't.

I want to hate you,

But I can't.

I miss you,

Even though I shouldn't.

I think about you night and day,

Even though it's been over a month.

You gave me so much to live for,

But gave me so much to die for.

Reviews

[chandlerl]

Ugh, this is so what the ending of a relationship is like!
So hard to cut the cord.
So hard when ur not sure..
But I like the representation...it's right on point.

[Fernando Dardón]

Very short poem but so full of emotion. This is a mixture of feelings, contradictions, and it recalls memories in such a "Bittersweet symphony" to my eyes. I once had such delusion and it was hard to overcome it.
At last I came to the conclussion that no one is worth it to make ourselves miserable or in canfusion state.
I loved specially the lines:

"I think about you night and day,
Even though it's been over a month."

Because it remarks how time is felt in those situations: like it was stopped

Very good poem and very deep!!

Fernando

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Lovely description of that confusion...or maybe a fear of one's emotions. afraid of just living with them. when something keeps you away from the one you love.

100 points

[Kaylee April]

I like the form of this. The structure adds to the back and forth energy of it. It describes well the heartache that we all go through at some point.

[dexterous sam]

awe...so true and relate to everyone who has pass through that rough patch of love ..and it still persist in life ...good work :))