wrote when i was depressed...

yep... the title says it all

Are you really to blind to see
That you're not helping me,
Not at all.
You keep pushing me down, helping me fall,
Slowly killing me.

You've taken away my happiness,
But you want me to smile?
You've taken my light away in this mess,
Can't you see, I don't care anymore if I die?

And then, one day,
When everything will end,
You'll try to save me,
But it will be far to late.

I will drown in anger in hate,
In darkness and despair,
I can almost hear your sad voice-
I was just saving you from yourself...

Author's Note

review?

Reviews

[Tomislav Petricevic]

Damn, this is good. I can truly picture the sight in my head - the expressions you use really set up that dark mood that you've succesfully created. Poems like this are the ones I want to read, not some written-by-a-ten-year-old-kid bullshit you can find on every step. You have to go through that which you write about, and (from the title) I can see that you did just that. That's why this work is so great. I hope that this review brings you even the tiniest bit of light :)