Renewal

a simple poem about recovery from despair, about faith and hope

After many comebacks

To my own past tense,

To fresh roots and buds

Offering new sense,

 

I have seen those white wings

Struck by too much light,

Burnt and then divided

Faltering in flight.

 

From their earthly ashes

Grew a chain of rings,

Eyes were closed and pierced

With that darkness stings.

 

Blind, from a soul lily,

I took just a part.

Couldn’t  bear more weight

The moon was apart.

 

I abjured that crumb

Letting it to yeast

Between sky and earth

Near man life’s feast.

 

Around dawn I heard

Through the sunrise shrouds

Heartbeats of a dream

Breaking all the clouds...

 

(First written in 2007)

Reviews

[....]

Very nicely written, the flow is spot on.
Loved the rhymes as well.

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Thank you very much.:)

[Shin ( formerly known a..]

A born again dream. Adorable.