Growth and Breed

Albert’s Blue Rose Poetry café Tovli’s Ten revisited “Ten for Ten”contest

Listen! The Earth is packed with people,

moaning under our footsteps.

Eternal peace is endangered

far below and far above us.

 

It started when a child

peeked into the Holy Book,

reading aloud things

eyes were not supposed to see.

 

Like this all ancient sins reiterated

in his big human family who listened.

Reviews

[Helen Crutchett]

My goodness, you poets are going to make the 'judging' of the "Ten" so difficult! Wonderful concept here....very well done! ~ Helena :)

[Cristina Moldoveanu]

Thanks:) I enjoyed the challenge to create a poem with these 10 words.

[Heromen Selena]

Nice :) I like yours better honestly...

[Marie]

When forbidden things come to light...so do forbidden sins...