Seasons of Oblivion

Excursions to oblivion

Take these eyes , shut down this skin 

Stop this blood from running cold 

Stop this heart from boiling thin

Insurgence of oblivion

No territory 

lost or won 

No race against a dying sun 

No place to hide when all is gone 

Cadence of oblivion 

A silence lost 

A silence found 

The chance to take time and again 

Enigma of creative sound 

Inversion of oblivion 

A trail cut out 

A passage in 

These seasons of oblivion 

Finality in motions spin 

Reviews

[Tevo77777]

The rhyming pattern is good, but why was this in the sci-fi section?

Also, I don't understand this poem at all.

It's about something or other.

[Niamh Croneka]

Yes It is about something or other.
I put it in the sic-fi section because I had no choice but to put in in a section and the sci-fi one was the least inappropriate.
Thanks for compliment on rhyming pattern

[Tevo77777]

Try poetry next time?

[Laura Almeida]

you can really tell the agressive writting