Pathetic Story

I can't really say what I was thinking when I thought of this. It's honestly not about anybody or anything, it's just an idea I had and figured I'd write it out.

There was this girl
Which at first glance
I thought could give
A true romance

 

And then she smiled
And then she spoke
And then I saw
Her life’s a joke

 

She drinks all day
And smokes all night
And in her soul
I saw no light

 

My eyes did tear
My heart did sigh
For it was then
That I realized

 

I saw myself
In my own glory
Reflected in her
My own pathetic story

Reviews

[_mal]

This is cool, it deals with some sad ideas. Would be interesting if you could expand on parts here

[wolfshrew]

when this happens, its always disappointing

[jemajo]

Very nice.... I like this. "My own pathetic story." Nice line... I feel the same.