Rain

for marina

When the world is mourning

I celebrate

The atmosphere is pleasing,

and make it easy to cope

The clouds cover all my sorrow

my diffrence, my being

rain is my missunderstood feeling,

that no one can duplicate.

Author's Note

i wrote this on a rainy day, and felt unafraid to show my feelings about life, which are, let's say, less than positive.

Reviews

[Jules]

I like the line "rain is my misunderstood feeling"!! very cunning and also a very profound image of what your feelings are! The connotations are well put-forth and also concealed a bit, which I enjoy! well written, concise, yet speaks out loud to the reader! good!!