Calm Before The Storm

For joclyn

everything is calm

everything is quiet

you know it's coming

it's just off the horizon

it will ruin all that you've worked for

you know it will

But,

now it is time to relax

let your body go limp

let you thoughts consume you

your time is limeted

you know

but right now

it's

Calm Before The Storm

 

Author's Note

Uhh, yea.

Reviews

[fotini]

"...you know it's coming..."
yeah...i think that everyone knows when the storm is coming....
but i suppose we all choose to ignore it!!!
you're describing this feeling very well!!
the feeling of piece before a great "fight"!!!
the feeling of the unknown....and the pain it brings!!!!
a great poem!!!!

[Marina]

I love this.

It's realllllllllyyyyyy good.
I love the ending.

[Ally Baker]

wow great write evn though it was a really simple poem. it had few words but still managed to capture the thought. i really liked it. great job!!