lazy love

Sun sprinkles 

drenching our skin 

dripping on our souls 

quenching our thirst  

with golden hues and splashes of greens 

we hide from the tempest 

inside a fort designed by 

our lips and tangled limbs 

grabbing at my hip 

drawing me close 

all the while whispering 

with a wolfish smile 

I love this storm 

Reviews

[ghostlyhearts]

This was great and didn't seem like a lazy love to me!

[AaronFreitas]

"our lips and tangled limbs
grabbing at my hip
drawing me close
all the while whispering "
Great descriptions in this write Crystal! I enjoyed it :)

[Suzy Hazelwood]

Wow, what a stormy relationship - I adore this! We'd like love to be all soooo serene, but it's often quite like this. Well done Crystal, very creative, and yet real! :o)

[Chris]

doesn't seem "lazy" in the least...

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmingham]

Thank you for your review

[Chris]

anytime... it was a fair and strong poem.

[Echoes of Eros]

Your love awakens such beauty in the trembling of the storm. Yes, there is a magic delight in these touches of warmth when the world outside is alive in a fury of wildness. Loved this.

[Emily]

I love the way you started it!
Keep it up!!

[wordman]

wolfish smile,reminds me of robert lol a great love story

[Robert]

Lovely poem you have penned here Crystal, sensual and from the heart.

[Mara]

A really nice poem
thank you for sharing:)

[terry smith]

Very nice poem!! wolfish...sign of the bad boy! :D

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmingham]

The worst ... lol no really its my hubby he just reminds me of a wolf

[terry smith]

the wolf represents the lust in a mans heart, a mask safely worn by your hubby no doubt! :(

[terry smith]

sorry supposed to be a :)