A Soul Moves On

In honor of my deceased step-dad.

I see him over there

Words left unspoken

But he wouldn't care

Now things are left broken.

 

I see him over there

How I miss him so

He used to always share

He used to always glow.

 

I see him over there

We had many laughs

I cannot compare

He left; but not on my behalf.

 

I see him here

His body cold

As I start to tear

May god have his soul.

Reviews

[BlackMoonRising]

It reminds me of when my Grandpa died...very beautiful! You get 100/100 for almost making me cry. XD

[A]

I like the rhyming in your poems, it's well-done,
this poem brought tears into my eyes... My dad passed away couple of years myself, I feel your pain... The loss of a beloved person is the most tragic thing that happens during out life-time... I'm deeply sorry for your loss
I hope he is in a better place.
Very well written and sincere piece.