Death

Like a song never ending, protector of scorn and dischord

Just an abyssmal feeling of hate and misery

Upon you like disease to the wound(it never truly leaves)

Slowly eating you away, a ticking time bomb per say

You think it's gone, but it's right in front of your face

Nowhere to run or hide, why not just give up and die?

It's coming your way, (Whatcha gonna do?)

The deafening silence, the fear in nothing there

The blade swings high and another "Soul is saved"

Mourn and regret is all theycan do, but that shouldn't bother you

All of this you wished for, you never wanted to be here

 

Beautifully written like a poem, but strategic like a war

Your time is ticking, the sand settles to the bottom

Tragedy awaits you, you're nothing anymore

What awaits you at the end? Some God? You're wrong and you know it

Look up, the end is near, the screams of fear, nothing you can do

The shadow leaps forth, swings the scythe, your spirit is now free

Death awaits us all, standing at our side helping us fall

Take it's hand, step into the unknown, a place of dark intentions

Let their cries not harm you, for its just begun

Looking into the void, I smile and await my endless pleasure, but it'll be empty

Time for one last breath, it's scream is unbearable,

Hello Death..

Author's Note

Any comments, confusions, criticisms, ect... much appreciated!

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

I liked this one...
As this is very sad and a full of darkness.
Great write!

[J.P.O.et]

This one is very sad and depressing............
and I love it. You're bleak outlook is personified
by this poem of such despair and desolation.
'looking into the void, I smile and await my endless pleasure, but it'll be empty'
You capture the air of vulnerability and hopelessness well, nice work

J.P.O.et

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Or you could just not read their crap in the first place. I agree and like the tone in this. I'm curious, why did you write it in just capital case? Just it takes away from the words.