My Flower

A Story by Rose Hagerty

Sweet, simple bloom.

The purple petals unfurled in all their beauty. Small and delicate they seemed like they would crumble at the slightest touch. Like the purple flowers she was a beauty. But I too was worried that at any moment she would crumble and fade away like the flowers she loved so much.

© 2017 Rose Hagerty

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G. Writing

This is amazing I admire your writing. The way you compared the flower petals to the girl was genius. I felt a connection to this poem.. Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Poetic Beauty

This has great imagery and the comparison between the flower petals and the person are wonderful.

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

8 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad that you got that I was trying to convey the delicate frail nature of the girl t.. read more

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Added on July 17, 2017
Last Updated on July 17, 2017

Author

Rose Hagerty

Ottawa, Canada

About

I'm an artist, but I also enjoy writing as well. I usually enjoy writing random short stories and writing pieces but I also like writitng poetry as well. more..