Deadly Cheater

He came home
So very very late
I asked him
So he lied and lied
We laid in bed
So comfortable
He smelled like...

He didn't have my perfume
So I pushed him away
I cried silently
So he wouldn't get mad
We didn't talk for days
So I was lonely
He didn't answer

He pushed me away
So I left
I walked out
So I found a shirt
We fought
So I asked
He said he went

He bumped into a girl
So I let the lie spread
I imagined him
So I cried even more
We were away
So why did I care
He was the one

He cheated
So I let go
I should have killed both
So they could feel my pain
We were together
So why did he cheat
He said I wasn't good enough

He and I
So loving so caring
I had to go
So I lie in bed crying
We stopped talking
He came to my house

He apologized
So I cried and left
I left my own house
So he wouldn't follow
We haven't seen each other
He moved on with the other girl

He forgot me
So I still care
I pulled the trigger
So the poison love would go
We shared our funerals together
So don't be sad
He choose her so I choose for..

Me and her to both die together

Reviews

[Deuces]

Raw, honest and painful. Makes for the best writing/poetry.

I feel the pain and despair in this piece and the therapeutic effects of putting these thoughts on paper.

[wordman]

this is a sad write I know love is strong but it`s not worth death it`s his loss
he was`nt the one for you

[A. Amos]

This is strong and I love the way your poetry flow, such a captivating piece of art you created and love the twist at the end. You write from the deepest part of the heart and your words makes a huge mark on your readers heart...

[Angie G]

Very strong poem. Sometimes our hearts lead us to do desperate things for Love. But life is to beautiful to let go. Very good write.