daggers

dagger and knives

they're taking lives

within your sins

is where i begin

 

to wake and ache

from those wretched snakes

you left under my bed

in turn for the tears you shed

Reviews

[JC]

I can feel your love of singing and that need to delve into the passion and hurt of relationships.

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Pain from love’s rejection is like steel splintered shards penetrating one’s soul – your write – condenses and encapsulates the heartache felt – Interesting and creative …. :-)