Irrevocable Friendship

A poem, about my new short story :) Does this make you want to read the story.... https://www.facebook.com/pages/Curious-Alice/246414818762343?sk=wall =)

Is it friendship or an obsession?

I am stuck in a stage of an anxious reasoning,

Testing the murky waters,

 of rejection.

I’ve developed an addiction,

To the burn of my jealousy.

The sear of envy,

To solve this problem,

And show her that I’m serious.

I will make her learn,

I will make her remember.

But she won't hate me for it,

She possibly wouldn't dare

Because it doesn't matter in the end.

Friends who kill together,

Stay together....right?

Reviews

[Katelyn]

Stunning piece!!! 100/100

[Adalynn]

Great write. It's dark yet is truthful with friends. There can be jelousy and gossip with any friendship.

Adalynn

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that has a dark and sinister tone..sounds like a excellent opener for a short story.

[Distant horizons]

Oh, i likey. sweet and sinister all in the one write, excellent.

[Follow The Lion]

This poem, although brief, says quite a lot. Possessiveness, jealousy, gossip.
Friendships, especially among us girls, can involve quite a lot of drama....

Great read.

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FTL

[Lina Grey]

Interesting poem. I like how the pleasant language and cheery flow suddenly cut off by the unsuspected ending add a slight sense of insanity. Just curious, what is the name of the short story this is about? Thank you.

[Eagle Cruagh]

The picture is priceless.
The poem is clever and well
done.
----- Eagle Cruagh

[Moflo]

This is an interesting piece. First off, the structure and rhymes are nicely conveyed. Also I like the way you ended it a lot. Good job.

[Kim's Poems]

very nicely done, love the picture as well.