Stranger Friend

Ode to my internet friends! (and one in particular). 'This story tells our tale until the end.'

Oh dearest friend of mine, who knows me well,

Though might we never meet, you know my tale;

Not knowing name nor past, our hearts we tell,

And stranger yet, you know my pain and ail.

Across the globe, we speak of things we see,

Of things we wish and hope, and things we fear;

You give my life excitement which I dream,

Across this land afar, you feel so near.

And I lament, that we shall never meet,

For Fate has set our paths for separate ways,

But yet, our tale entwined for time to greet

And brighten those our darkest, lonely days.

But I will not forget you my dear friend;

This story tells our tale until the end. 

Reviews

[Tom]

A fine tribute to friendships formed through the grace of modern technology, though platonic and non physical in nature but often just as alluring and intriguing due to circumstance !

Splendidly creative and kudos indeed to your imaginative writing CrazyW !

[Mazie]

Thank you very much Tom ^^ and Kudos to you because even your comments and reviews are so poetic and lyrical :D I appreciate you taking the time to read and review ^^

[ANM]

Friends electronic or otherwise help make us who we are, and good ones are hard to find!! Bravo to you !!

[Mazie]

Thank you very much ^_^

[ANM]

You are most welcome!

[George Peck]

That is a wonderful poem. The other writers said it I know I'm one of the many that feels that way. feels like everyone on here are friends yet we don't know each other. thanks

[Mazie]

thank you for taking the time to read and comment ^^

[little thoughts]

oh very touching. sometimes strangers understand us better than anyone :] , well written

[Mazie]

thank you ^^

[John Byrd]

Very sentimental and heart felt. I'm sure many of us feel this way about writers on here and people on the internet just in general. Love it :)

[Mazie]

Thanks ^^ and yes, I think it is a mutual feeling among many people :)

[Frieda P]

Very sweet, we are strangers in essence yet know each other quite intimately from afar, strange how technology brings souls together. Well done.

[Mazie]

thank you very much ^^

[Frieda P]

Was my pleasure.

[KK]

That was an adventurous piece in my eyes. I enjoyed very much

[Mazie]

thank you, i'm so glad you liked it :)

[Sophy Freebirds]

Aww.. this is so sweet. Its tragic that we meet the best people online but we are not able to see them physically. I liked the line of being away in this globe but still sharing the feelings in lonely days.. well written :)

~Sophy

[Mazie]

Thank you very much ^^ And yes, it's very true... I appreciate the thoughtful review ^^

[Sophy Freebirds]

De nada sweetie :)

[Malister Mikey]

I think this poem is soft and sweet I really like this one, because I can completely relate to it. Great work as always.

[Mazie]

thank you ^^ and yes, I think especially online, there are a lot of people who have been in situations like this perhaps