No One

No one to talk to

No one to call

No one to comfort me

No one to see me fall

 

My heart hurts so badly

I wish I could die

Everyday it's the same

I can no longer lie

 

Depression's a disease

Even if the law isn't sure

And loneliness is the cause

Which has but one cure

 

You can cut your wrists open

You can cover up the pain

You can smile 'til it's true

But you'll still be insane

 

So when no one reaches out

When no one calls your name

Know that you're all alone

They're all feeling the same

Reviews

[J.Black]

"Depression's a disease

Even if the law isn't sure

And loneliness is the cause

Which has but one cure" ---- some great lines you developed here. Overall, this was well penned.