ANGER

I was born with a deadly weapon

worse than an atomic bomb.

It is not user friendly.

A master tool of torture

kills

sorrow suffocates in its wake

and while I grieve

it breeds.

Reviews

[richieb]

Cyndy,
I completely understand what you are saying. Without going into any personal detail I have had many issues in dealing with my anger. I think I have improved as I have grown older but I have torched a dragons path in my day.
One thing that has helped me is watching someone else have a meltdown. I get to witness how ugly an immature I look. Tough lesson to learn.
Well written and well understood.
Richie b

[Cyndy Robinson]

Thanks so much richieb!

[Ed Hart]

it isn't as though we don't have anything to be angry about...it's the passing it on that's the problem...visiting your pages this morning, i like your work

[Cyndy Robinson]

Thank you so much ! Will visit some of yours a little later. On my way out the door to work.

[Carolynn]

I like the way you get right to the point and show how ugly anger is - very well written!

[Cyndy Robinson]

Thank you!

[Jennifer Shaw]

This piece is magnificently relatable. A strong anger also lives within me. I bottle it up, but it leaks out sometimes and shocks those around me. I reel it back in quickly, though. It frightens me how strongly it burns inside sometimes. I have no clue as to the source, but I have a feeling it's my own doing, whatever it is. That's usually how it works... =/

[Cyndy Robinson]

Thank you for your kind words, if I was honest it isn't my normal style of writing. In trying to write about something else this just sort of ended up being there, lol.

[maria ( rose)]

Anger is like flowing water; there's nothing wrong with it as long as you let it flow. And you let it flow with this piece..nicely done !

[Cyndy Robinson]

I think it is my nemisis! Thank you so much!

[Relinqua]

Well done and great job on describing anger in a a really poetic way, it was direct and very relatable, very intrigued by the description, nicely done😊👌👌

[Cyndy Robinson]

Thank you so much!

[Relic]

I think its safe to say yo clearly defined anger in a poetic way we can all understand and think about. Nicely done.

[Cyndy Robinson]

Thank you. I would never say this is one of my better pieces, but then again it did't take much time to write, lol.

[Cyndy Robinson]

I have a question. How do you feature something on here? Have seen people do that but havent been able to figure it out.

[Relic]

Go to your manage section and look for the stars next to your poems. Click on the star of the poem you want to feature.

[Cyndy Robinson]

Clear concise and simple. I love it. Thank you.

[A hare off]

Lol, remind me never to borrow your tool box or cause you to reach inside of it because of me. :) Nice description of anger, you nailed it.

[Cyndy Robinson]

Lol, I'm Irish with Red Highlights. A double barreled shot gun leveled against me I think. I am reminded of Richard Gere in Pretty Woman stating he paid thousands of dollars to a shrink to be able to say he was angry. I can say it, I can scream it, doesn't seem to matter. I am still angry.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

That's "Anger" and you've defined it right 👉

[Cyndy Robinson]

Thank you my friend!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend :)