Missing you

This is a poem about friendship gone wrong.

For all the things I said to you,

 for all the times I tried,

My obssesion with pleasing you

and all the times I lied.

 

Watching you from a distance,

tears spring to my eyes.

What went wrong with our realationship?

O, how time does fly.

 

Sometime I'll come see you

and hope it'll be worth while.

Sometimes I want to be you,

I miss seeing your smile.

 

I'd take back all the things I said,

I didn't mean them to be true.

Because I only realized now

how much I miss you.

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[DeevaMarx]

I love the desperation, a lovely sequel could be the apology? Oh and there is a small spelling error where you have decided 'I' and 'Miss' needed to be one word. Unless that was on purpose.