SLOW DOWN!!!

A Poem by DBURKE

Ym dnim si duol

Eht sdrow era gnihsur ni

On repap ot etirw

On nosrep to eticer

Taiw, taiw….

Fi I tsuj ekat a tnemom

Wols nwod

AH...

My mind is loud

The words are rushing in

No paper to write

No person to recite

Wait, wait….

If I just take a moment

Slow down

My words will not be jumbo

The flow will result

In this-

© 2010 DBURKE

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Comatose

Wow, this was very original. I like the idea, even though I seriously tried to read the whole thing backwards before I realized I could just read the bottom. ^^

Posted 15 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

.	The first stanza was an easy read... for me is that a bad thing? Posted 15 Years Ago The first stanza was an easy read... for me is that a bad thing? Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 16, 2010
Last Updated on February 17, 2010

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DBURKE

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My name is D.Burke. I was born and raised in Milwaukee WI. I write fiction horror/thrillers and poetry. I decided to pursue my writting career after the tragic loss of my eight year old daughter. My f.. more..