THE WAY WE KISS

Both hearts burning with passion
Eyes leveling out and starring at the lips
Waiting for a sign the head to turn
The body to lean in
Finally reading one another
We connect
Softly catching one another's lips
Caressing desire
Turning our heads
To douse the fires of our bodies passion
Soft… against the skin
Sweet…with tiny nibbles
Plump smooth cushions
Custom made just for me
Pulling away
While I hang on
To your bottom lip
Already wanting more

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I like the way your writing has these spikes of tension that pop up. I find it interesting how you can end on one of these spikes and still manage to bring closure to your work. This style of yours is truly unique. I really enjoyed the poem. I found it sensual and erotic, but not crossing the line. I admire how you [Censor] yourself and still invoke such passion in a reader. I saw everything so vividly, I could almost feel every word. Bravo. Bravo.

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hmmmm...sounds like the day will start slowly :-)>

[QuothCorvid]

I really like the anticipation you feel in the opening lines the craving of something that could mean so much.

[That Girl]

Absolutely amazing. I agree with Constance it makes you crave a kiss. Love it!
10/10

[Constance-Outspoken]

Nice, soft, sensual flow. This poem actually made me feel a hunger for a kiss just like you describe. Awesome job! One of my faves of your work so far.

[Gregory H.]

You know, this is an example of a well thought out poem...It has passion, Visuals, and flow...very nice job...

10/10

As Always
Gregory

[The Analog Kid]

Ironically, to douse the passion, the kiss...
Don't hang on to the bottom lip, because that leads to more...
This is just the preview...

Tate is right...stop it already...LOL!

[Andrew]

I like this one! Very vivid descriptions and sensory details. Great little poem to capture something simple but special.