MELODIC SEX

The keys of the piano

Stroked so softly

Like butterflies

And sweet melodic rainbows

Joined by Soothing violins

Lioness prowling

Intensifying the melody

Ready to devour

Base dominates

Giving depth

Meaning

Climax

Drums solo

With rhythmic strokes

Knocking

Banging

Acoustic finally

A voice of pleasure

Heavenly harps

Small drops of dew

Calming linger

 

Reviews

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finally acoustic

soft silence culled from want
a moment lingering in sweat, realized
never did the price arise
nor was concern there to distract
his gift held her
her hold gave him
together bonded over a notion
this was proof of purpose
fulfilled

thank DB...hope you don't mind my thoughts...they were inspired

[Tate Morgan]

you are a very intense person

[Natalie.]

Woah. Intense. I like. =) I love how the imagery itself tells the story without the scene really being explained. artful.

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

You are such a sensous writer. Passion seems to flow from your fingertips. Beautiful work!

[ICE]

I love this piece!! The way you wrote this is soo sensual and subtle. You can feel the passion and heat with only a few words. Great write!

[alan khan]

very sensual

[Andrew]

Amazing write!

[David Lewis Paget]

A piano Concerto in 'You' Major. I like that. I've seen sex dealt with in numerous ways by numerous poets, the rough and ready, and the sophisticated. You certainly fall into the latter category. The 'small drops of dew' say it all.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Man..This poem was so Frantic! I loved the intensity and ferocity of it all.
The imagery was powerful. I could hear it all. WOW. Its Amazing!

[Mary]

the imagery was intense, and it was very creative! great job:)